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Ray Trace is watching a fascinating display by
Trixie. She swings her legs back just before a cut.
Audio: Sleazy strip music, low murmur of background chatter. |
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View: roughly from Ray's perspective into entrance.
People at the bar respond to noise.
Audio: Sleazy music, murmur of speech interrupted by a loud crash. |
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Ray and Trixie look at the noise, troubled.
Audio: Music stops. Dialogue: Ray: "What the hell..." |
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Three thugs barge in, shooting people. A guard
pulls a gun at the thugs, but get his head splattered on the back wall.
Audio: Panicked screams, male and female, gunshots. |
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Ray jumps up, pulling a shotgun from his trench
coat. Trixie tries to restrain him from standing up.
Audio: Gunshots, panic screams. Dialogue: Trixie: "Ray, don't!" |
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Ray loads his shotgun and fires. Trixie plugs
her ears
Audio: Very loud gunshot. |
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One thug gets his head blown to bits, but other
hoodlum returns fire
Audio: Gore-splut, scream, loud gunshot. |
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Ray's head explode. Trixie screams in desperation
and horror.
Audio: Gore-splut, mute Dialogue: Trixie: "Noooo!" |
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Trixie is frozen for a half a second, and quickly
turns to look at the thugs.
Audio: Slowed and muted screams, gunshots
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Trixie rolls of the stage. Just as she is over
the edge, a gunshot hits the spot where she was.
Audio: Gunshot, moaning of the victims. |
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Trixie lands on her feet behind the stage, and
glances the corpse of Ray.
Audio: Music, gunshots, moaning, screams Mental note: Thugs think they have killed Trixie and therefore will
not
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Trixie sees Ray's gun to be intact.
Audio: Music, mixed with shots and screams of agony, subsiding moaning. Note: Hilight the shotgun by focus pull, vertigo effect or lowering the camera to bring the shotgun into foreground Duration: 1.5 seconds |
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Trixie reaches for Ray's gun
Audio: Music, muffled gunshots, moaning Note: The sound of the gunshot that hits this gun should begin a couple frames before the cut. |
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Trixie snaps her hand back when she hears a gunshot.
Audio: Music, gunshot, a whiplash sound |
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Trixie looks in horror at the Ray's gun.
Audio: Music, gunshots, moaning |
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The gun is Foxtrot Uniform (i.e.. F U or fucked
up)
Audio: Music, dissonant tone? |
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Trixie glances at the thugs, jumps up and starts
running (towards exit).
Audio: Music Note: Trixie is not sneaking, she's making a run for it. Thugs are coming at her. |
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Trixie heads for emergency exit, as a gunshot
blasts a wall right behind her head.
Audio: Music, Gunshot, breaking wall, Trixie gasping Note: Trixie reacts to the hit that lands behind her head by jolting, shielding her head and grinning. |
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Thugs orders his accomplice to follow Trixie
in a coarse voice. Thug arms his shotgun and follows.
Audio: Dialogue, music, shotgun cocking, heavy steps Dialogue: Thug: "Get her!" Duration: 2-3 seconds. |
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Trixie runs into the doorway
Audio: Music, steps, Trixie gasping. |
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Trixie runs up the stairs. Silhouette of the
thug is visible from the doorway.
Audio: Music, steps, Trixie gasping. Duration: 40 frames. |
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Thugs strides in the doorway.
Audio: Music, thug grunting, heavy steps |
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Thug walks up the stairs
Audio: Music, steps, grunting |
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Trixie exits a doorway and makes an abrupt stop.
Audio: Deep gasp, steps, shoes sliding on concrete, Traffic noise |
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Trixie is standing on a broken ledge, looking
down. Camera pans down to view the breathtaking fall.
Audio: Dramatic roll, traffic noise. |
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Trixie looks into the staircase
Audio: Music, traffic noise. |
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The thug strides up the stairs, bellowing at
trixie.
Audio: Steps, Music, dialogue Dialogue: Thug: "Nowhere to go, bitch. I can seeeee youuuuu" |
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Thug leaps out of the doorway, turning to the
direction where he saw Trixie go. Amazement is clear on his face.
Audio: Music, steps, gasp, traffic noise. |
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Camera pans from left to right, displaying empty
ledge.
Audio: Music, traffic noise |
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Thug looks around, puzzled. Camera tilts upward
to show Trixie hanging by her nails. She drops down, makes an somersault
forward and lands silently behind the thug.
Audio: Music, Traffic noise. |
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The unwitting thug stands on the edge, looking
up and down. Trixie stands up in Alien Queen manner behind him. Trixie's
nails have specular bloom or something to give the impression they're VERY
sharp
Audio: Music, traffic noise, very subliminal Alien scream |
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Trixie snaps thugs shotgun, and Thug fires it
as he jolts in fright. At the same moment Trixie puts her left hand on
Thug's neck.
Audio: Music, TN (Traffic noise), Shot, Hands slapping, Thug gasping in terror, dialogue. Dialogue: Trixie: "Bastard!" |
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Trixie squeezes her nails inside thug's throat
and slashes four deep cuts into it. Blood flows copiously.
Audio: Music, Ambient, Thug rattling. Note: Trixie may shove the thug down. |
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Trixie checks the chamber and heads back into
the club.
Audio: Music, Ambient, steps. |
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Trixie steps out of the staircase, sweeping the
with the gun. Red glow of fire plays on the walls.
Audio: Music, steps, crackling of fire, whiplash sounds |
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The interior is set to fire, and the last thug
is obviously screwing a dead body.
Audio: Music, Crackling of the fire, gasping thug. |
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Trixie's jaw drops and her eyes dilate in disbelief.
She inhales deeply.
Music: Music, deep inhale. Note: Close-up is too extreme, slightly back. |
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Trixie lifts the gun pointing at the thug's neck.
Thugs thinks it his accomplice and speaks. The chick is covered with blood
and misses a few boy parts.
Audio: Music, Thug grunting, fire crackling, Dialogue. Dialogue: Thug: "Get one while they're still warm, he he."
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Trixie lowers the gun slightly. She speaks just
before she fire.
Audio: Gunshot, music, fire crackling, dialogue Dialogue: Trixie: "I'll get you, handsome." Note: Gun is more tilted, pointing to thug's lower back when firing. |
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Slow motion: Thug leaps forward when the gunshot
penetrates his abdomen. He screams in agony.
Audio: Music, Slowed down scream. Note: Thug spins his head just before he is hit.
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POV from thug's head. Trixie reads monologue
to thug.
Audio: Music, fire crackling, moaning, dialogue Dialogue: Trixie: "I'd normally bust your skull in with a pipe..." Note: Trixie will clench her free hand into a fist repeatedly. The gun waves slightly, according to speach. |
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Trixie fires a slug into thugs back. Thug yells
in agony.
Audio: Music, gunshot, fire crackling, dialogue. Dialogue: Trixie: "But since I am in a hurry..." |
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Trixie empties the magazine into thug's back
Audio: Gunshots, fire crackling, dialogue, music, click Dialogue: Trixie (between shots): I'll just... shoot you... into... fucking pieces!" Note: Last pull of the trigger results in "click" |
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After gun has stopped firing, Trixie throws the
gun at the thug. Her nails extend one by one.
Audio: Music, fire crackling, gun hitting the ground, thug rattling, dialogue Dialogue: Trixie: "Now, If my clothes are burned, I will resuscitate and kill you twice." |